And she,
Admittedly,
Thought about it
A little more,
Feeling that abysmal
Tension come wrap
Around her heart
Covered,
Enveloped, now
Surrounded by
A new secret,
Holding love hostage, not
Able to burn
Out of its hold.
But still
She let it be,
As she knew that
This crushing calm
Was a whole part of the
Enigmatic
Experience.
She felt
Foreign mumblings
Come with this torque
And they told her
That he and she were in
Fact not one, no.
They were apart.
So irrevocably separate,
But still
Trying to grasp
The other in
The only way,
That they had yet to try,
Almost in what
Seemed to be a
Star-crossed desperation.
Despite
This aching, failed
Romance they tripped
Upon, lasting
Seconds, lost so quickly,
They were still so
Crisply alone,
On they’re own.
She had
Tried to come in
His bubble just
As he had tried
To understand her mind,
But it had seemed
To be aimless.
Half-hearted, unfocused and distracted.
If we
Only knew. But
All the same, the
Iridescent,
Clandestine bubbles that
They had joined in
Under and through,
Popped like
A lone eye blink;
Silent, serene,
And effortless
In and of it’s cleansing
of itself there.
Quiet, over.
Friday, August 24, 2007
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4 comments:
What a passionate, wise piece of poetry!!!!!! I felt some hope in there too....I'm not sure where, but I felt it, and it, in turn gave me hope. Perhaps I was not supposed to interpret it that way. (Although I believe everyone has a right to their own interpretation.) I don't know...the poem seemed calm, like you had moved on. Something like that.
I haven't talked to you in so long! Thank goodness i found this blog; to at least hear your voice through your poetry. I'm not sure why I'm speaking so formally....but it feels right, no? Maybe just to me again...
hahahahah hi! woo, glad I'm done with that comment. *wipes sweat off brow* lol I'm just kidding. but here's the energetic jordan that you usually see, right here! Just didn't want to worry you...When you read that "Just didn't want to worry you" do it in an English accent. I'm not exactly sure how you read in an english accent...actually I do. what a dumb thing to say.
oh crap. I hope that second comment didn't kill the first comment. PLEASE NO!!!! Read the first comment, savor it if you wish, take it as a whole individual thingy. THEN read the second comment and do NOT link it in any way. They are very seperate comments and they both come from the same me. So bear that in mind. If you must, imagine that I hadn't written a second or third comment. And then read the first comment. THAT'S how you're supposed to read it. Sorry for the confusion.
Maybe since this is like a poem-and-art blog, I should comment in a poem. I'll do an acrostic poem.
Good job!
Outstanding!
Marvelous!
Anticipation!
Candy!
Kiwi juice!
Elephantine!
No!
Zebra!
Ice cream!
Eeeeek!
Lollipop!
ooooooooh
Lollipop!
and to clarify, I'm not "glad I'm done with that comment" I was kidding.
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